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"Well if you can aid me, I'm sure I can find you somewhere," Lionel promised. "That's very nice of you," Alice replied. The boy, who looked to be about twelve ...

"Sure thing Adam," Heather agreed. "You go take your nap." He nodded gratefully and departed from the room. "So we watch the line?" Rick asked when he was gone. "Piece ...

Amelia The second day continued to be very promising and in an alarmingly fast rate I gained another four crew members which made a total or one deck boy, one ...

We all care and Suzie is right. Choose one and try to write it, try to take it a little bit at a time, just write a page or so ...

I liked this. Especially the interview part. Very well written. It needs some work though so here's a few suggestions - Some still think this might be a peaceful coup. ...

Kitty brought her fighter back in and then walked across to Bella's spot where she and Chris (see, sometimes he gets acknowledged) were checking over the modified fighter. "New parts ...

Oooh, I have Cyla don't I? Sorry about that! Forgot I joined. Here's a bio - Name: Cyla Claw: Sable Appearance: She's a calico. Her coat is white with black, ...

Hmmm. Not sure if I should answer this just now as I'm still half drunk from last night/this morning but then maybe that will help. Heh. Cal is right, it ...

Isabelle "Oh my God!" I shrieked as Elizabeth slipped on the rocks and fell into the water. My other companions turned to see what had happened and Gregory was the ...

Coal "Fine. But I'm taking Michael," Keturah, as I had now found her name to be, decided. "Oh no. Slit will keep a good, close eye on you," The man ...

That's a great idea Nate! I'll join as soon as I'm old enough.

Raven I followed Warren and Luke around the cave or rather I followed Luke and Warren brought up the rear, dragging his feet across the ground. With a sigh I ...

Thanks Gadi, those are some really helpful comments! In fact, I believe I shall write a second draft and see if I can make some improvements.

Amelia "Any ideas yet?" Quinn asked impatiently as it grabbed hold of a corner of the map so that it could look. "Ooooh, I've been there!" "See," Zephyrus said, folding ...

Sorry Alice! Scipio and Alice wandered around for almost an hour before they decided to ask for directions. "Leave this to me," Scipio declared with a wink before stalking towards ...