Rydia

I think these are generally well drawn but I agree with Via - the right one in the middle row is very hard to make out. Some colour would help ...

The figure in the first one is good but you need to go over some of your pencil lines, tidy it up a bit and maybe add some more colour ...

Thanks for the critique Reyu!

Raven I held my mace out in front of me as the huge creature reared its head and then fixed those piercing eyes upon us. "I'm guessing only lightening works?" ...

I'd probably not do anything if it was only a paragraph. Too hard to prove and not worth the trouble.

Hey there Alix, it's lovely to meet you and welcome to the site!

Day 1. Katalyn 5:10 In the end I decided to get the little camping stove myself and set it up some distance from the others. Then I located a pan ...

"Why didn't you say that earlier?" Scipio grumbled as he helped Alice out of the armour and inspected her bruises. "Come, I'm sure you can replace me in the next. ...

Could you try to put everything you want to say in one post Gwen? It's so much neater that way. As for the stars, you have to review people's work. ...

"Spells?" Lionel asked as Scipio began to climb to the roof of the stables for a better view. "What do you mean.Magic?" "No, no, just a joke," Scipio replied, craning ...

Well it's great to meet you. What sports do you like? And are you interested in werewolves at all? We have quite a community of vampires and werewolves. Hehe. Not ...

Hehe. Someone's impatient, no? Hi there, I'm Heather. Why not tell us what your interests are? Introduce yourself a little!

No problem Kyte and well, calico just seemed so perfect =) Cyla "That's all I need," I took in the new cat's appearance and scent, filing the records for later ...

I think I shall join. Name= Arwyn is her original name but she has gone by many other names and tends to think of herself as Melody. Age= 24. She ...

"And I don't want the tournament canceled," Lionel protested. "Then I wont let it be known I am a woman." "Wait, why do you get to have all the fun?" ...