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Arwyn The chef in the kitchen loaded the tray up high before placing it gently in my hands. "There you go girl, that should do." "Thank you," I responded with ...

Ah, I can understand your need to concentrate on NaNo so no worries my dear and first of all I'd like to say that I love how you ended this ...

Happy Halloween everyone! And Happy Start of NaNo too!

I'm a little confused. First they were trying to leave the city and now they've split up and are planning on meeting back at the inn? Other than that though, ...

Hi again! Sorry it's been so long but I'm going to get back to critiquing now =) In general, I liked this chapter. The help desks are an interesting idea ...

Hello there, it's lovely to meet you and welcome to the site! If you'd like to chat, want a critique, have a few questions or would like a buddy then ...

Yeah, that works, good thinking TN. Luke It wasn't long before the sea assassins began returning fire on me and many were hurrying towards the forest, swords and daggers raised ...

Raven The Husk faltered as it's leg was torn off but only a minute later it had recovered enough to strike out at Karana, pressing her against the wall. On ...

Hey Charlotte! I do already know you but it's lovely to find out a little bit more about you. Corpse bride is an awesome film =) And you live in ...

Cyla It didn't take long for Raul to come round and I twitched my ears as he curled into a defensive ball. "So you're my brother?" Raul began to swish ...

Arwyn I'd watched from a reasonable distance as Azrellia talked with Humma and his brother, irritated that I was forced to remain in physical form for another hour yet. I ...

You need to finish this one before I can critique it properly. The basic outline you have looks nice and I think the bottom frame will be really interesting but ...

I think you need to work on your style a little. You keep varying it. Personally, I preferred it without the coloured background. I think it would be better if ...

Yes, your detail is good in this one, especially that first frame. I think you need to add just a touch of shading and sketching to your backgrounds and the ...

I think you should try to be a little more consistent with your style. Add some shading and more detail to this one. The plot is a little easier to ...