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Hmmm. I see that there is more but I don't think this was as original as the first part. Perhaps this should be in fan-fiction? Only it's seeming very harry ...

That sounds like a good idea. Perhaps try one in a pinky red as well? And what colour are you thinking of doing the wolf's fur? (Presuming that you're going ...

This is intriguing. I think it needs some work where structure is concerned - you need to divide it into paragraphs and it looks neater if you start a new ...

I think they look a little like a lion's eyes. Colour can change a lot though so don't worry. I think they'd look good in a silvery grey or perhaps ...

Day 1. Katalyn. 5:23 The soup finished first and I removed the pan from the little camping stove before realising that we had no bowls to transfer it to. "I'll ...

These are really interesting. My favourites are the upside down one, the last and 'click away' but they're all very creative. Three cheers for boredom!

Oooh. It would be interesting to see how many have more than 500 reviews...

We're not. The sea assassins (the ones who were holding Dahlia captive) are shooting at Luke because he attacked their camp as a distraction so Aren could go rescue Dahlia.

I love the tree and I saw the 13 as well =) I think the leafy part could be better but those branches are great and it's well detailed. I ...

It's brilliant! I love the shading on the trousers and it's very well drawn. I think the hat's a little off but the gun is fantastic and generally it's a ...

Arwyn I caught up with Ramere and Azrellia at the bottom of the flight of stairs that led to the tower. I half hoped that Ramere would offer to carry ...

Your editor has arrived Jess... First I think you should up the rating to R rather than PG13. Here's some corrections and comments... I tip-toe up the stairs with a ...

I love the dragon and the yin and yang symbol!

"Come on, Bella," Heather took hold of her arm and the two hurried back towards the hangar. "I thought the mission was to take out the cruiser," Bella grumbled as ...

Heather took a seat and stared at the line upon the screen, watching it fluctuate slightly but not enough to cause concern. A few minutes passed and then it happened. ...