Rydia

Why are we always getting stuck? Okay, we need to get everyone out of this camp and back to the forest I think so Amanta and Kenran can come save ...

This part was very slow and I think you could have spent more time describing the leaving of the boat and such. Instead of saying that there was clearly history ...

Good action with the Hawks and I'm sorry but I have my fingers crossed that Khor is going to drown =) Here's a few suggestions - He gazed up at ...

It's very imaginative, Reyu. I think you're missing a few apostrophes but then, that doesn't really matter and I'm sure you'll add them in later, wont you? The rhyme is ...

That's very creepy. I like the patch of light in the top corner but I think the tree should be more in focus. Great picture though and your niece is ...

2 AM on the fifth. Hmmm. We'll see, we'll see.

I agree with Via, it's very good and the girl's frames in the last one are brilliant. Maybe try t be a touch more consistent - her eyes and hair ...

Forget-me-not-blue!

Hello there Sarah, welcome to YWS! If you'd like some feedback, have a few questions, want to talk or are looking for a buddy then feel free to pm me. ...

I love chess =)

I love the scene in the bar, certainly one of my favourites so far and the description of them jumping across the rooftops was lovely. In general, this was a ...

I think it's a great idea but there are a few things we'd need to sort out. Like how big was you thinking of making X times a week? Only, ...

I enjoyed this part though having both Knall and Khor trying to escape the places they have stayed the last few days at the same time is a little strange. ...

Okay so as a few of you already know, I've decided not to do NaNo this year. In fact, I've only ever did it once before and fell out with ...

You have a humourous little piece here my dear :P I love the very western tone of it and I can almost imagine some old cowboy sat in a tavern, ...