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Daniel The strangers exchanged many words but I ignored them. The wound disfigured Annie's head and though it did not bleed, I could not ignore it. Frantically, I reached out ...

Hmmm. I'm not sure I like the riding the dragon. I think it's abit unoriginal but the imagery was nice and in general, it was a reasonable section. Not my ...

Cool. I love basketbal and I used to be a very frequent blader.

Could you review someone's work first actually? We have a small rule that for every piece you post, you review two so everyone gets helpful comments. Thanks and I'll keep ...

Hello again! Why not tell us a bit about your hobbies?

Hello there and welcome to YWS! I myself dabble in poetry so I'll probably check out some of your fact, if you want a critique, have questions, want to talk ...

Hello Suzie! Initial thought - you have a chilling, well written little story. Second thoughts - this would work really well in present tense and if the ending is more ...

Hello again! A very short section so just a few comments this time - Derez stooped down and scooped up a[s]nd[/s] smooth rock. “Uh… [s]H[/s] h ow, exactly?” They all ...

You have some lovely desription here but your grammar and typos let you down a bit. Plot is going well though it's still a little unclear in places and I'm ...

Thank you my dear =) Daniel "What happened to her?" I raised my head a touch, my stiff, aching neck protesting violently. The figure was hazy due to the tears ...

Scipio got the feeling that Alice didn't want to go on a picnic with Lionel but he could think of no logical reason that they shouldn't go so he shrugged ...

Hmm. I think we need another male and I haven't created one for a while so... yeah, I'll have a guy... Name= Daniel Briars. Age= 23. Appearance= Daniel has deep, ...

I don't mind them and some are really fun or interesting, especially those on YWS.

Hello there, it's lovely to meet you! I'll happily help you with your English and your writing as will every other member of this site. My name's Heather. Welcome to ...

Heh. Those are great. I'm going to see how many I can break! XD