Rydia

Day 1. Katalyn. 5:35 I used the toilet, washed the pan and then was about to hurry away when I caught a glance of my reflection in the mirror above ...

Hello there Chris, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions, are looking for a 'buddy' or would like a critique then get in touch, pm me. Seriously. Hardly anyone ...

Hmmm. I think more people need to be consulted on these ideas. You and Vernon seem to be doing a lot of steering which is okay but it leaves the ...

I like it but if I didn't know the topic, I'd think she were part cat not wolf. Maybe if you move the slit higher up and have the beginning ...

Daniel The fire took some time but it gave me something to do and I patiently blew gently on the grass and twigs until they took. Then I began to ...

Hello again! I like this, a very pretty little poem. Here's a few suggestions - Rolling in, fading out Almost like a breath [I like the imagery here but perhaps ...

Great poem. Very... deep.

Wow, it's nice to know a little more about our brilliant administrator! Do you prefer to be called Lee then? I shall try to remember that...

Hello! I think you've made some huge improvements here, especially where dialogue and description are concerned. In fact your description of the room is beautiful! Here's a few suggestions - ...

"Rick?" Heather called. "Rick, where are you?" she entered yet another room of the ship and found that it too was vacant. In fact, the only place left to check ...

Daniel I looked up. Making his way through the snow was a dark haired man, a gun in each hand, and warm clothes on his back. "Are you alright?" he ...

Nate, I have a request. I don't know if you have anything like this in America but Sunday is Rememberance Day for the brits and I think a word or ...

Daniel "You're right," the man agreed and the group came to a reluctant halt. Most knew better than to allow themselves to sit down in the snow. Instead they hovered ...

Daniel "We were heading South," I sighed, speech coming easier now that my lips had thawed. "That's where we're going. You should come with us," the woman who had talked ...

No imaginary friends for me either. I had toys and such. A doll called Becky but I didn't talk to it or anything, just carried it around occassionally and only ...