Rydia

Well it's not exactly what I'd call an essay but here's some corrections and improvements you could make - It [s]had showed[/s] has shown me the principles of punctuation, grammar, ...

I think it was a very kind thought. And I love the use of the quotes. Especially the second, it's one of my favourite quotes. As for criticisms, I think ...

Well it could be longer. Naturally the poem is limited by it's form but your lines could be longer in themselves and you could add more imagery. Also, it needs ...

Hmmm. I'm not sure. To be honest, the title doesn't really inspire me and it's a bit strange. Afterall, ink usually is blue... I think it's better to start with ...

I think it's really good, very creepy. Perhaps you could have Cameron show a stroke of remorse at the end but to be honest, I don't think there's anything wrong ...

Hi there. I think this needs to be moved to fantasy fiction so if a fully fledged mod can take care of that I'd be very grateful... As for advice, ...

I haven't heard that before. In fact, I don't think my teacher has ever talked to me of time travel. Lol.

Hello there Jas, it's lovely to meet you! Welcome to YWS. If you'd like a critique or have questions about the site or life in general then feel free to ...

I thought it was really good. I liked Adam's article a lot and Suzie's was interesting.

This is beautiful. I think you should have left a bit more space between the head and the edge but it's lovely. I wish the lighting was better so I ...

It's really cute. You should finish colouring it though.

No, don't drop out. Most of us are quite lost at the moment anyway but we should be able to work something out together...

Grim reaper is all yours Hatter and why not Gwen? Here's my character - Name= Adelaide. Nickname= Adi. Age= 27. Hair= Long and silky black, often worn in a plait ...

Solomon is the most powerful wizard who has ever lived. Throughout his life he has done much good and as a reward, the grim reaper extended his life and rewarded ...

Hello there everyone, it's lovely to meet you all and welcome to YWS! I'm Kit or Kitty or Heather if you like and if you have questions or would like ...