Rydia

Awesome! And thank you =)

Cade - Hehe. A pie would be nice but your comment's much nicer =) Via - They certainly will!

Thank you Trident =)

Okay so last time this didn't work too well but in honour of The Young Writers Society's third birthday, I am re-opening the campaign to answer all the unanswered posts ...

Considering that my penguin has never visited Aunt Petunia, I decided to bake brownies and cakes. My

I'll back Dragons. Go Horace!

Considering that my penguin has never visited Aunt Petunia, I decided to bake brownies and

That would certainly be more conveniant for UK players but we'll understand if it's not possible.

Considering that my penguin has never visited

Ooooh, sounds interesting. I might be able to compete on one of the days but half eleven is a little late so I can't promise anything.

I like the idea of having the dragons pull the plane but seriously, this is too parallel to Harry Potter. You've made it so that the dragons are invisible, your ...

Hello again! It's quite hard to work out the order of these sections. At the moment, I'm going by the date you posted it but this seems to come before ...

He had never been there before but William seemed to know the route the same way as if he were heading home, memorized. [This is awkward. Maybe '...but William seemed ...

I think you had some lovely description in this section but it needs work. Some of your sentences are very confusing and it's hard to follow your plot, the way ...

Hello again! I think you have some good descriptions of the snow and such here but try not to info dump - most of that first paragraph is information that ...