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Heather "Okay, when I asked if we could talk about this, I didn't mean in your dungeon," Heather grumbled as she huddled in a corner of the cell. After all, ...

King - Hunter Queen - Suzanne

Hi there. You have a wonderful poem here! A few suggestions - Heart of the Desert A wind blows by, carrying a burden of myths, [I think a semi colon ...

Ooooh, Jodi Picoult. Now there's a fantastic author. Have you read the Pact? I think that's currently my favourite of her books.

Hi there! You appear to be new so welcome to the site! Would you mind reviewing a few other people's work before you post more of your own? Only we ...

Hello there, welcome to the site! I'm one of those helpful mod elves our dear Lizzy referred too. Or a junior one at least. Actually, I'm currently in the process ...

Adelaide "So we're all in agreement?" one middle aged wizard demanded, his voice harsh and grating. "It wont work." The crowd parted to allow a young man with short, auburn ...

And what exactly does level one holy do may I ask?

Hey there Kelsey! Welcome to YWS, I'm Heather and it's lovely to meet you. What genres do you like to read and write? If you have any questions, need a ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS, it's lovely to meet you. Why not tell us a little about yourself? What genres do you like to read? Any hobbies? Taste in music? ...

I did TN. I posted about a meeting of the races and covens and such =D That's where your character can come in too. Just go to the first page ...

Thanks Cade, that's 150 more points for you =) Let me know which piece you want critiqued.

Go dragons! Everyone should join the dragons!

Hmmm. This was too short for a reader to get much out of it and you need more description. For example, I'm unsure as to the gender of your persona. ...

Heather climbed out of her fighter as soon as she arrived in the hangar and nervously awaited the inevitable arrival of the captain. Her heart thudded softly in her chest, ...