Rydia

Day 1. Katalyn. 5:45pm. Left alone with Elains, Keri, Dave and Mev everything suddenly made sense. Well, not everything but something that had been bothering me. Jo was in love ...

Adelaide "Fine but if anything goes missing it will look awfully suspicious," I conceded. Then the air before me began to fold back and peel away and shivers ran across ...

Partly that and partly because it was unanswered itself and partly because you deserve a crit after the interest you've shown in my storybook and partly because I like to ...

Hehe. I'm pretty sure we have another thread for it as well.

You're right again. Punctuation is very important but Brad makes a good point. Occasionally a lack of punctuation is just as effective and I've used the technique once or twice. ...

You have some really good tips here Suzie and I think I agree with all of them and I certainly wouldn't be any good at critiquing without some of the ...

8/10 - some lovely imagery Kylan. Colourful fountains erupted mid air as sparkling waterfalls cascaded over dancing rocks. Each firework was then left to simultaneously melt into the sky like ...

Sure, go ahead and create a character bio.

I think this is a bit short for me to critique properly but I'll give it a go. I think that's wishing everyone happiness is a sweet sentiment but as ...

Good luck to you as well Areida though I doubt that you need it. I can't wait to read everyone's work!

Oooh, Blank sounds really interesting and you've already finished university? That's so not fair. Good luck with all your projects Jiggity! And keep us informed on how they're doing. Heather ...

Tell us what you like to read and write. Do you have hobbies? Well of course you do so what are they? Oh and I'm Kitty by the way or ...

Oooh, I hope I can make it to the final game!

That's an interesting way of planning. I don't think I've ever written the ending of my novel before the beginning. In fact, I often have no idea how they're going ...

Wow, that looks quite complicated...