Rydia

Lol. That sounds like a similar situation actually - I also have a dog rather than a cat because my father dislikes them but my mother says she may finally ...

Hmm. You have some pleasant images but it seems a little pointless. Perhaps this would work better if you expanded it to include a story of why the persona is ...

Hello again! In general I thought this was good though you could develop the characters a little more and some extra description of the creature in the lake wouldn't hurt. ...

I've never seen any of them to be honest. Do you have a favourite, one you'd recommend? Christmas is approaching and as usual, my list is currently very short.

I think this is the first of your introductions I've read and it's nice to know a little bit more about you though I suppose some of the details (name ...

I think you've drawn the mother very well, there's some great shading on her face and hair and I like the bracelet and ring. Some of your lines are a ...

I'm not sure that you actually want this critiqued as a piece of writing so maybe it belongs in the lounge or about the authors? If you do on the ...

Isn't a Libretto an Opera script? Wow, that would be really hard to write. How far have you got so far? Have you started yet? As for tips, I suppose ...

Oh right. Lol. Don't I feel silly.

Hello there Cat, it's lovely to meet you and welcome to the site! If you have questions about YWS, want a critique or are interested in the buddy system, feel ...

I think they'd presume that they were to bring him to the Howden's though.

Thank you for the welcome Griffin and here is my character for those who have not seen it - She stirred and groaned, an olive hand reaching up to bush ...

Jane "Edward? Oh Eddy, where are you?" Jane called out, hurrying around the corner, golden braids flying behind her. "Oh Eddy?" Jane paused to smooth her blue, silk gown. "Oh ...

Raven Luke moved towards the crowd. "The task is done," he announced, "the husks are dead and those we could save are free." "Those you could save?" one woman asked, ...

"Nothing," Alice lied, "I just don't like him." "Okay then," Scipio agreed, guiding her back to the picnic blanket with a steady arm around her waist. There he sat her ...