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Re: Anagram Fun
I love these anagram generators! Let me see. Oooh, what about one for my name? Heather Marie Warren - A Weatherman Heir Err A Warrant Rehire Heme A Mantra Rehire ...
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Re: Smile or not =X?
I think it's more of a secret keeping smiley actually. Sort of like my lips are crossed?
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Re: hero villian
He was both. He was a hero because he thought he was liberating the people. But at the same time he was a villain, he did some horrible things.
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Re: This is awesome!
Cool. I shall look out for them in the 2010 Olympics.
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Re: Mortal Death, Immortal Love #1
This is a good start. I think you need to add some more description but the action and dialogue you have are lovely. So far your characters still need some ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: The Chronicles of Flaughston Book 1: A Reign to End
Firstly, I think it would be easier to read if you started a new line for each line of speech rather than posting in block text. As for the story, ...
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Re: Gone
I really like this. You need to add punctuation to it but it flows really well; you have a very natural rhythm. Perhaps you could expand it, add a few ...
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Re: Essay Scholarship
Hmmm. This isn't a contest that you're running so perhaps it should be under 'the lounge' or 'in the news'?
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Re: VG Rumble
Raven "Then we know our heading," I said. "Yes, we'll leave in half a day," Luke decided as we headed back to the others, Luke carrying the piece of the ...
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Re: Magic vs Science
Mishca The Mech began firing at the village and I decided it was time for me to intercede. I advanced towards the small group, away from my cover behind the ...
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Re: Acceptance Into the Young Writers Journal
I don't know if I got in or not yet but I'm certainly buying a copy and I'm also getting one of the YWS t-shirts for Christmas =)
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Re: The Parodoxis
Jane I struggled against her grip and with each violent tug I was able to drag the woman an inch closer. One more inch and I knew that if I ...
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Re: What is your sign?
I'm Pisces - Positive traits - Imaginative and sensitive Compassionate and kind Selfless and unworldly Intuitive and sympathetic Negative traits - Escapist and idealistic Secretive and vague Weak-will
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Re: High School with THEM
Arianna "But where?" I mused, turning in a slow circle to inspect the room. When I reached the half way point where Lucy was in my sight, I paused. She ...
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Re: Would you like to earn some points/ critiques?
Yes, still giving points Cade, I'm aiming to get the count under one hundred if I can, no matter how long it takes.
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