Rydia

I love the little red dude, he's brilliant and the whole picture is really well drawn and quite amusing though skinny dipping in the cooler? Shouldn't he have less clothes ...

I haven't seen Akeelah and the Bee but I think I understand the piece well enough to give you a few pointers. In general, the piece flows well with some ...

An archaic poem is basically a poem written in old English. And thanks for the review =)

Mishca I hung back as the magic users began to gather together. In fact, I was intrigued by their sense of community, the way they put theirselves at risk for ...

There's dialogue, characterization, description, plot and so much more. Grammar is just a minor part of any story.

Jane Just as Eddy reached over to grab the woman who had released my arm, the paradoxis officer and one of the prisoners came hurrying around the corner. Taking the ...

Kate "What is it?" Sara whispered. "Footsteps," Lindsay replied. "But they're getting further away." "Well what are we going to do?" Sara threw her arms up in despair and kicked ...

I agree that his head is too small but the detail's great, especially on the clothes. Maybe work on having a larger range of shading to give it a bit ...

Arianna Lucy flinched away from me and cringed but she seemed to be calming down and as her breathing steadied and stabalised, I took a seat beside her and tucked ...

"Well of course you like me. Hell, we've been through a lot together," Scipio chuckled. "No, I mean, I like you," Alice said. Scipio paused, unsure of how to respond. ...

It is? Heh. "What idea?" Scipio asked. "Two plans. The first is we stall. Pretend to be ill or something and then you can't possibly duel tonight." "Somehow I don't ...

Local Enemy. Wow, your name is so much more fun than mine. And Immortal Dove Lord? Now that is a great name for Voldemort!

That one's a bit strange and random to be honest. i love the landscape but the gun and the changing of time seem quite random.

I think the second one is pretty cool but the text needs to be clearer, more readable and more frames would help slow the action down a bit and make ...

The animation is very simplistic but pretty cool. I love the guns and when the stick figure gets shot, the explosion and wound are very colourful but I think it ...