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Congratulations Suzie, well done! That's quite an achievement =)

Oooh, it sounds it and in that case you simply must have some mysterious elf who aids them on their quest. Or maybe an all knowing, wise dragon who loves ...

Scipio Time seemed to leak out of the room and the two sat in silence, they stood in silence, they paced in silence. In fact they were silent in silence. ...

Thank you Kim, I'm glad you liked it =) Read it aloud a bit, or ask other people to read it aloud. That's a really good idea, Colleen and something ...

Kate "I... I don't see them anymore," I admitted biting down hard on my lip. "I don't go home during the breaks." "But what about at Summer?" Sara asked. I ...

Who's the author? I think I might take a look at the first. I'd hate to try and read them out of sequence.

I haven't. What's it about?

I like your use of short sentences and repetition here, both very effective. And the plot is chilling. Not quite what I expected when I first began to read it. ...

I love having issues that reflect society within a story. Somehow it makes the writing more real, more prominent. But Snoink's right, info dumping isn't good and there are many ...

I think a good way of describing scenery is to try and visit somewhere similar to what you're describing. Like, if you want to have a park in your novel, ...

I completely agree. In fact, I always try to make my mysterious characters blend into the background and I never actually say that he/she is mysterious. I just have them ...

It's lovely to hear a little bit more about you, Cat and yes, Rubert Grint is awesome though I've only seen about half of Driving Lessons. I really must get ...

Sir Samuel needs to be with them - Jules' character.

Jane "Let me go!" I demanded, still wriggling in the woman's grasp and kicking my legs against her body. "You're only making this harder on yourself," Kera muttered. I shouted ...

Mishca I watched as the cave contracted, growing smaller and smaller, getting closer and closer to crushing the two inside. -Very well, Mischa, take who you have. Now- Axel relented. ...