Rydia

Thanks everyone, I just finished donating the points and for those collecting credits, I will post your totals on the storybook.

Are you serious? That's barely even half a post! *grumbles* Scipio disliked having to lean against Alice. She looked so fragile, so perfectly small and delicate that he feared he ...

Ah, that helps a little but isn't your work more fan-fiction then?

I like this chapter. Some excellent action, nice descriptions and good dialogue. The portrayal of Meg is better too though you do still need to work on the other characters ...

This is beautiful. I love the detail you've used and the dragons are very well drawn! Interesting positions too. My only suggestions are to add some colour and to try ...

I think you had some lovely imagery but the theme of the poem is a bit over-used and you don't seem to make a decisive point. It starts off about ...

Thank you Via! Points are on the way and I also owe you a critique.

Thanks for joining you two! Via - thank you and feel free to choose a combination of nine spells and abilities for your character. If you want something stronger like ...

Hello there everyone! Okay so this is a storybook with a difference. As part of my 'unanswered posts' campaign, I'm creating a storybook where your characters gain skills and abilities ...

Lydia I slept a little and awoke to find a note placed carefully upon my chest. I sat up and read it. So Ayra has gone hunting? Nothing unusual there. ...

Day 1. 6:00pm. Katalyn. I dumped the two hammers I was carrying near Kevin's bed before following Bernard through the store. "We can get the blankets first," he decided. "Good ...

The woman awoke a second time to find herself alone in the room. It was darker than before and therefore much less painful to behold. The woman lay still a ...

Hi there new members and welcome to the site!

Congratulations Dono and Areida. Well done, first dance goes to you! But I want second ;)

Good luck with that Muffin and if you get bored of the real world, we'll be here waiting for you. Will miss you, Heather xx