Rydia

Try to avoid the triple posting mad! Okay, let me see, nice and easy - Via Kitty15 She Writes Next one is Claudette to Kylan

This seems a little superfluous. I think that's what the book reviews section is for anyway...

Raven I flinched away from Karana but she seemed determined to halt the flow of dark, scarlet blood. Blood. Blood as red and deep as betrayal. If betrayal were a ...

I think it's a beautiful piece of none fiction and very well written. More description of the setting would have been nice but there really isn't much wrong with it. ...

Hi there! As this is the literary forum, I'll refrain from critiquing the drawing too much but I think her arms are a little too long and the right goes ...

I like the rhythm and rhyme you have here but I think it needs to be expanded and tidied up. You had a few mistakes, it was lacking in grammar ...

I've not seen it but one of my other friends expressed a similar dislike of the lack of solution.

Lol. How strange!

Lol. See, I knew it wasn't my turn ;) Scipio didn't know when exactly he had lost consciousness but he opened his eyes to see a tall girl with curly, ...

The photos are great Suzie!

Raven I carefully extricated myself from the limbs of the dead creature and looked up at Karana steadily. As steadily as the blood dripping from my shoulder. Drip. Drip. Drip. ...

Day 1. 6:15pm. Katalyn. Bernard caught up with me and again the awkward silence fell between us. At first I felt uncomfortable and my unease grew as we turned down ...

This is a good poem Via, if only because it inspires so many different opinions and it's open to so many interpretations. But I like it for more than that. ...

Awesome! I might call in. I have a few things I'd quite like to say...

Seriously, this campaign would not be possible without you, Via. I am forever in your debt!