Rydia

I think it's all a bit abstract and rough. I like the raggedy, messy bun she has, that gives her some real character and the cigar is pretty good but ...

Thanks for the link, Via, I've had trouble in the past with killers. Making their motives believable can be so difficult.

Another boss? =) Raven I flinched as the screech rendered my ears painfully out of function. The horses, tied to some trees a short distance from the lake began to ...

Scipio nodded and pulled away, storming off to the store room to rummage through the weapons. "Sharp... sharp... I need something sharp," he mumbled, moving aside a baseball bat to ...

Congratulations everyone! And three cheers for Suzie for all her hard work!

The first one is uber abstract which isn't usually my style but I kind of like it. The use of colour is great though perhaps some careful smudging and more ...

Hello there, I don't believe we've met yet. Welcome to the site! I just thought I should let you know that one of the rules at YWS is that you ...

A friend recommended it to me a few weeks ago actually. Is it worth reading? Does the good outweigh the bad?

Raven I helped move the bodies absently, my mind completely blank - an abyss in my head. Blood. Body. Rough, scratchy goblin skin. Soil. Leaves. "That's all of them, let's ...

I don't know much about the Saguaro community but it's probably so that they can protect themselves or perhaps because of the sort of small animals that are there? So ...

I had a quick look but I'm not sure if I'll join.

Hello again! You have some very effective repetition here and a nice use of short sentences but a touch more description would be nice. A little more character description of ...

Oooh, I love the idea of switching perspective for when Cameron is Toby. That sounds really interesting but you'll have to be extremely clever to trick the audience into thinking ...

Arianna "This way... I think," I mumbled as we traversed the streets. "You don't know... the way... to your own house?" Lucy asked. "Sure I do," I replied, "but I'm ...

We'll miss you Kylan!