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Raven "Hopefully we'll not need to. Do you think you can ride? We really should leave here." Luke nodded and I helped him to stand, wrapping an arm around his ...

Hello there Kelly, welcome to YWS! I'm Heather and it's lovely to meet you. If you have questions, would like a critique or are interested in the buddy system, send ...

I'm going to work on creating a race...

Damian I wasn't hiding. That wouldn't be my style. I just didn't feel like being seen by the others and the auditorium was usually empty this time of day. Usually. ...

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Raven "Luke got thrown against the other tree and..." I paused, taking a deep breath, "...I don't know where Warren is. Give me a few minutes." I closed my eyes ...

I think I'll move this one to writing tips. *Moved.*

I think I'll have to take another look at this when I'm next working on new characters. Sometimes I have difficulty creating pasts for my characters and you gave some ...

Then I've had it in an omelette but not on its own.

Yay! But we have an awful lot of missed birthdays to celebrate...

Section two is very accurate. I've fallen into each of those pit falls at least once and they really are the destruction of a novel. I think I'd add another ...

I've been meaning to read this for a long time and I'm glad I did. Those are some great tips, Cal and I'm pleased that you separated repetition and redundancy.

Fried cheese? What do you mean? Like putting cheese in a frying pan and frying it? I'm a little confused...

Awesome, I get to be 18! But wait... I missed my party? Awwww.

Mishca I followed the man inside his cabin and then turned as the others filed in, trying to memorise their faces; my enemies. "We need to regroup. Is this everyone?" ...