Rydia

Awesome Clau! Such a very deep, well wrtten poem. I just know it came from the heart! So does a new post count as a review?

Isabelle "Merely scolding you for your conduct last night," I replied with a slight frown in Elizabeth's direction. "My conduct? And which part of it displeased you?" Gregory walked further ...

Oooh, I love murder storybooks though this will be the first time I haven't had control of the murderer. Should be a new experience =) Name= Danielle Nickname= Elle or ...

- Merry Christmas Sarah!

Yay for more Mercenary Wings! An excellent chapter my dear. I'm loving the character of Lane but starting to wonder if I'm so fond of the king. He seems rash ...

Happy Birthday Crysi! *Brings out cake.*

Gregory I smiled to myself as I listened outside the door. Oh how fun it would be to stride in now and have them wonder if I'd heard! But perhaps ...

Martha "Good morning, miss. The mistress bid me bring you some soup," I entered the room and placed the tray upon her lap. "Do you want the fire starting?" "That ...

Hello there, Eliza! I have quite a few comments to make about this piece so let's start with something very general - imagery. You have a good use of description ...

Raven "Thank you," I whispered, smiling gratefully at him. He nodded and stepped outside, towards the horses. He began to ready our mounts and I joined him, removing their feed ...

Mishca I eyed the guns hopefully but burdened with the weight of Annie at one side, I decided against demanding one. Besides, I could not afford to seem eager to ...

Hey there Calla, welcome to YWS! It's lovely to meet you. What genre of books do you like? Do you have a favourite? If you have any questions about the ...

Gregory I waited until I thought she was asleep before placing the book on the chair and crossing to the window. I drew the curtain back an inch and peered ...

Hmmm. This is reasonably written but it's much too short to be critiqued properly. Please try to write the whole chapter before posting on YWS so that there is enough ...

This poem is lovely my dear! Or rather it's morbid and creepy but I like it ^^ I wish I knew what the title meant but I can take an ...