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Re: Scarlett's Corner - NaPo
1. I love the use of colour here but a couple more details might have been nice, just to pick out more of the image! 2. I agree with Jas; ...
Apr 4, 2012 -
Re: Things I Want To Tell You
I think the first is my favourite so far. Especially I would not want for our first conversation in thirteen months and some tattered weeks to reflect anything more than ...
Apr 4, 2012 -
Re: The Collective Corner
The first has some beautiful images and the rhythm is so soft yet haunting. I love that half rhyme with go and bone. The only thing I would suggest is ...
Apr 4, 2012 -
Re: Look! Mesh actually *does* write!
I like the first version of number three better! The flow is a tad awkward around lines four and five but all it takes is a second read through and ...
Apr 4, 2012 -
Re: The Stadium DT [4]
This is not a chat room, guys! Please keep all posts on topic and use this thread to discuss the storybook only. If you want to talk about other things, ...
Apr 3, 2012 -
Re: Sirens in Suburbia
A little early to be resorting to line stealing, dear? With that said, doooo it! :D 3A) A Visit From the Bone-Man There is no rain where the bone man ...
Apr 3, 2012 -
Re: Necropolis: Revelation [Rated R][Closed]
Kylie Harris Ashville - March 3, 2011 - 9:45PM It was dark. It felt good to be on the road in the dark because you knew almost defineately that anything ...
Apr 3, 2012 -
Re: Sirens in Suburbia
Acrostic chance poems, using Virginia Woolf's Between the Acts as the template. The last two are combinations of two, taking my favourite lines from each. I'll have to decide how ...
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: YWS: Apollo Updates Thread
Let's try not to get too off topic guys! People scrolling through, searching for updates don't want to have to sift through ten pages of randomness ^^
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: Eh....have a few questions :X
1. Live the story before you write it. This might seem contrary to most advise but I find that the stories I stay obsessed with longest are the ones that ...
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: Sirens in Suburbia
1A) The Man in the Moon There was a young man with a spoon who thought he made all ladies swoon One night he got drunk and fell out of ...
Apr 1, 2012 -
Re: Sirens in Suburbia
I have two poetry portfolios to fill so most of my attempts this year will fit one or the other. The first: Title: Sirens in Suburbia; required. Length: 15-20 pages ...
Apr 1, 2012 -
Re: Necropolis: Revelation DT
1. How awesome is it that Necropolis is back? Super duperly awesome! 2. Where are your characters starting? Just outside the settlement, at a roadside bar, looking for a guide ...
Mar 30, 2012 -
Re: Newbie :)
Hey yemski, welcome to the site! I I know what you mean about uni, it has a tendencyy to slow things down. I study Englishh and Creative Writing and I ...
Mar 30, 2012 -
Re: Necropolis: Revelation [Rated R][Closed]
Name: Kylie Harris Age: 27 Height: 5'8'' Weight: 155 Eyes: Blue-grey Hair: Blonde, medium length, often worn up in a tidy bun . Physique: Comfortable weight, size C bust, curvy ...
Mar 30, 2012
