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Thank you so much for keeping your promise Dreamy 115. Sorry that it was so long. I appreciate how you went out of your way to review the whole thing. ...

Nice story. Realistic. Cant give a reveiw right now but this is awesome.(so is the rest)

I'm sorry, but I didn't like this piece too much. It was very cliche and lacked the emotion I assume you're trying to convey. Keep working hard, though. You have ...

Thank you for your reveiw. :mrgreen: I will certainly listen to your comments. :D Oh and the reason why he can work at the service station is: all New Jersey ...

I'm having trouble visualising how someone strapped to a bed can be handed something. Perhaps it would be better if he released the main character before handing him/her the bag ...