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Re: To Lie Down With Dogs
Wow! That hit hard for sure. I'm actually a little scared that that piece was "real" as you say... However, it was wonderfully well written and made its point well. ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Conventions of an Innocent Toilet
Hey, great story! This sounds like an incredible party! However, as another commenter mentioned, this does need some proof reading before you do anything else with it, so I'll help ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Embrace the Madness (Chapter 1)
Hey there, just a second, I need to mop up my brain, you just melted it. Okay, that's much better. I hope you're pleased that my mind is now just ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Spring 1984
Hey! Great story, so I don't really have to say much. I agree with bradybrady, the twist at the end is cool, but it is sort of up-in-the-air if you ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Welcome to the Funhouse, Faxness (Maximum Ride)
Hey! Great to see a Max fanfiction on here! I absolutely loved the series when I read it a few years back, and I was happy to be reunited with ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: How'd you discover YWS?
It was about 3a.m. where I live one night and I was in that mood where you're tired but don't feel like going to sleep, and I remebered how earlier ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
HAHAHAH! THanks for a good laugh, my friend ;) Great idea to incorporate humour into such a serious storyline, genius! All of the noticable mistakes and typos have already been ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Sacrifice: A monologue
Hey Princess, love the piece! It's definitely a very strong and powerful selection, and I enjoyed every moment of it. I kind of partly agree with the other review on ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Pain is Beauty
Alright, I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this first, but before I do I just want to say this is one of my first poetry reviews, so forgive ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: The Touch of Fear (contest entry)
... ....... ......YOU'RE TWELVE!!!!???? Wow! Just to start off, congrats and kudos and props and all of that great stuff for even talking your parents into joining this site (If ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: All right, here we go...
Hey Gretchen! :) My name is Ryan, and I'd like to be one of the first to welcome you to YWS! Something about this site truly is magical, in a ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Oliver Stone - Prologue
@ xDudettex Thanks for the review! Totally agree with everything you say, but the only thing is the whole I NEVER is just a thing i do at the beginning ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Oliver Stone - Prologue
I NEVER imagined stepping through those doors for the first time would be so... so... Normal. Honestly, I was expecting to feel a wave of fear and awe rush over ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: The New Guyyyy
Hey noobie :) Look you already have 3 views! Didn't I tell you this place is awesome!?
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Darkmoor Juvenile Prison
(By the way, sorry for the late response.)
Jan 21, 2011
