RyanMichael13

Sorry about the overuse of the word shall! I'll fix that. The reason I used it (cough* overused *cough) is because I'm trying to make the story seem very slightly ...

Oh, sorry about that! The lady is meant to be kind of confused, as she only saw the protagonists hand slightly raised in the air, as an attempted wave. Thank ...

Thank you! I didn't even notice the "muttered" and "turns"! I will try to add more onto the setting and the mental state of the protagonist, to make it seem ...

Thank you for the advice! I decided not to add too much detail on the first two paragraphs, as that will be explained later in the story. I will try ...

Please, let me know if you enjoyed it, anything that needs to be fixed, and any overall comments!! If there's any hate, please let it be constructive! Arigatou! ~Thank you!