Ryan

The alarm began it's ear-piecring screech and flood lights burst into life as a small figure ran across the landing field. Soldiers poured out of every door, their guns loaded. ...

I believe (even though you resort back to the plain old gods) that this could really be something. I've seen alot of god films and I have to say they ...

Well it went through. I really enjoyed it. There were quite a few grammar errors and all but still a good storyline. Even if you did git the original storyline ...