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Re: Promise
Dear Darkangel I think that was very sweet, but you could have added more emotion in it :) Keep writing
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Bitten
Hey Clever, I think that was quite good. But it lacked detail description. What do you want to say from this poem? Hurt, death, Freezing to death? With Best Wishes. ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
Hey buddy, Nice twist at the end. Quite lighthearted. Keep Writing. :D
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Turn Two: Little Grey Men
Dear Occasional pessimist, You have quite a good imagination i must say. Nice style of writing. Dont stop this one. I have a suggestion. I wasnt quite sure is Abigale ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Turn 1: The First Whispers
Hey Alex, You know me. Anyways back to the story. I think there are many things that need to be cleard up. Like, what exactly is the Night of Dreams? ...
Dec 28, 2010
