Running_equals_passion

Maybe a sense of mystery is what I'm going for here? Maybe I want the reader to question the story as they read. Not everything has to be laid out ...

Another day gone. Another one messed up somehow. No matter what I do, I still can't seem to be as "perfect" as everyone else. There's always something that someone disapproves ...

Negative. "Amy! Amy! Wake up!" Damn. I was hoping the munchkin would forget, but I have no such luck. I pulled the pillow closer to my ears and rolled onto ...

Besides a few grammar related errors, it was good. I enjoyed reading this small segment and I say, "Keep it up."

I know. There are some typos and I see them now.... after I've posted it. Can't help but laugh at that.

Later that night, as I sat on my bed, feet tucked under me, doing what little homework I'd procrastinated on, I couldn't help but think of one thing. Why was ...

Another day gone. Another one messed up somehow. No matter what I do, I still can't seem to be as perfect as everyone else. There's always something that someone disapproves ...