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Re: Loss of Imagination
Ok, it needs some ponctuation, but apart from that it was great, and very true. Creativity is taken away Work is given everyday Imagination is cruelly slain Regurgitation of information ...
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Paradox
OK will relook at it knew something was wrong with it thanks :)
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: Love You Forever
Vey well written. But if forever was a day, I don't want to love you that way. I'll love you 'til the day I die, and live with you my ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Star and his journal
It seems wherever i look there are great writers. Very intersesting debut. Scary thought Earth in 3501. There is just one problem: I dont get who (or what) Star is. ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Runelord
Lol you really hit the nail on the head with your remark about people at school. WoW is a bit more profound than that but you got the general idea. ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: The Grim Life
Love this... It has no flaws... I love the way you describe the life of the grim reaper. I bet he thought I would find the unexpected music he zapped ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: The girl with the wild look in her eye
Answer to most questions: I have no idea
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Halloween
Wicked... thats all i have to say. Kepp writing :D
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Crystal Valley Part II
Wow... awsome... one mere review cant express how good this is. But (yes there is a but), there are some mistakes. Firstly “Okay. But I swear he said how kind. ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Alvalor: part two of chapter three
Hi, I'll just let you know that i havent reat the other Avalors, but I will get round to them as soon as I can. Anyway, I found this really ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Paradox
removed because it was very bad
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: Void
Ok I'm going to ignore of the spelling and grammar mistakes and go strait to how well written the poem is : Amaising... thats it I can't say anymore. Keep ...
Nov 15, 2008 -
Re: (:
I dont have alot of time so ill keep it breif: Hi welcome to YWS cant wait to read your work as always PM me if u need anything at ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Poem of the Prisoner
wow.... *speechless*. I never was one for poetry but this is something else :O. Still it must be reviewed and so I begin (keep in mind that whatever mistakes are ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Music
No other maiden fans ?:(?
Nov 5, 2008
