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You get a Prawn (alien) -inserts coin-

It is a good poem in the sense that it reflects the feelings of a child who has been told that Father Christmas does not exist. But it doesn't flow ...

thanks for the greate reviews. Yes I know there are questions and I'm pretty much making up (some of) the answers as I go along. I knew I needed to ...

This is my first post in a long time. The story has been in my head for a while now, and this is my first successfull attempt at writing it... ...

Hi there just thought about poltergiest it seems like a misnomer 'cos the way you describe him he's calm

Hi Mad_Moo (nuclear cows on dragons :P) remember me form the chat ? I'll get streight into it then :) She slowed as a scent slithered across the coating of ...

Sigh it is true that we must move with the times but i really like the old YWS. Meh I'm still looking forward to the new one as the people ...

Banned because I'm back

Hi, It's an interesting debut; still there are some things that caught my eye. First, I have to agree with Antigone that everything seems to perfect (but keep the happy ...

Witty and faced paced. Very good for a rough copy :D I think my dad thought I was an emu do you mean emo? still, if you don't keep writing ...

Hi and Welcome to YWS. A prophesy showing the end of the world has provoked a war that threatens to tear apart humanity before the disaster. It is up to ...

Hmm... where to begin, your other reveiws have listed most of the faults, but it seemed to me that I was waching a video with the fast forward on. I ...

Very interrseting, slightly predictable, but all the better for it. I would love to see what comes of this story :)

You get train crash -inserts coin-

This is the most awsome book I have read in my entire life and im just wondering if anybody else has.