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Re: Deleted
There isn't much wrong with this story. It looks interesting, the characters are well described and I had to look really hard to find anything wrong with it. “You’ll regret ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Hated - Part Two
Ok... It seems like a good piece, but you are trying too hard, particularly in the words department. And some statements just don't work at all. Panic soon settled in. ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Observations of a Prick - Chapter 1
I really liked this piece (I've read worse language so don't bother about me ignoring the PG-18 sign). It's sarcastic tone can really make me see the world through the ...
Feb 1, 2010
