Runawaythoughts

I'm not quite sure how this would be sang. I've been trying to hum a tune for it that fits? fast slow? i cant quite get it right. And melody?

1rst off, I like the thought process, disepearing people, undercover space statoins, but wasting it all on a place for suspeneded students, COME ON! This must be a fake right, ...

I like it I just dont think it makes much sense. Good luck i love the idea and i hope to see more.

Just a tip, first person usually isn't used in this sort of genre of English well. Maybe a diary or something would be a different thing but this doesn't work. ...

Fog hung on the streets of Sector 33. Big Ben sounded in the distance echoing through out the thin alleys and brick covered buildings. Gideon walked down the barren street, ...