Runawaythoughts

I love it! My only question is do i have to read 2 and three to complete the story? I started reading the second but its a completely different setting. ...

I love this poem! it was strong, to the point, and made complete sense. Great job! I know what you mean by your four friends. I have the same group ...

Ok here you go. My critique. ONE: i like the thought, too bad someone else had arleady used it! A user named PiePIeman 22 wrote the same thing about a ...

I missed the thought you were going for, but i liked it none the less. What were you going for? Some dead guy speaking to his son/friend near his grave? ...

I think this is great! It is detailed enough to stay descriptive, but leaves enough out to be timeless. Anyone reading this can think what they want, christians can think ...

Gideon sat awake in his room, staring blankly into the digital fireplace. He was exploding with energy, thinking of how splendid a full world would be like. Even when he ...

I LOVED IT! L-O-V-E-D it!. Only a few things i found though. 1) Yes i did think your characters were a little flat. Between Emma and Penny theres plenty of ...

Just to let you know... Dragon Bait is a real book, SO you have to change the title no matter what. Well, im going back to read your story this ...

Gideon stood still, hands on his knees, his chest heaving. It had been a long time since he had been so brutally active. He had been working out for the ...

OK i dont see how this is an action fantasy but ok. Now for the fun part heres corrections. The day had rung bright and cheery, I have no idea ...

I'll join as soon as you guys build a plot otherwise no way

Ummm not very romantic but u said more was coming soon soo im hoping to see the romantic part.

I LOVE THIS STORY! I normally think that historical fiction is kind of boring but this is great. I don't get why he's wearing a dress but i love the ...

I liked it. But it end really quick. Maybe you could add a little more or do you just like sirius. It was quite quick. Sorry but i cant get ...

Is Anstra supposed to be God? And is this church in heaven? And why wouldnt angels be angels in heaven? If i'm wrong sorry about this post then. Good luck ...