Runawaythoughts

Great Job! Your last reviewer caught a lot of your mistakes, and im not going to make you feel like a loser by repeating them, so besides that here goes. ...

Well, the link doesn't work but if you want to actually see what's up there just copy the link and post it in the bar. It works for me, tell ...

Okay, these are just doodles I've done. Sorry they aren't beautiful, and sorry the scanner sucks but hey, check out how I, the author, pictures my creations. :wink: [url]C:\Documents and ...

The rebellion sat quietly around their table, thoughts scurrying in and out of their heads, brainstorming. The clock ticked on the wall behind them, giving the room an eerie silence. ...

why didn't my attachment work! Anyone want to explain how it works to me.

OK please read and review, I NEED THE REVIEWS, no ones reviewing it anymore in the science fiction section.

Good job. Keep up the good work.

In arrogance I walk, glancing at houses adorned with snow instead of watching sliippery legions taking over the path. watching the slippery legions? add a "the" before slippery, which you ...

IGNORE MAKI CHANS POST IT FLOWS AMAZING! I LOVED IT! It almost sounds like a prohecy but i l-o-v-e it! few things though. a love lost, a love stolen, and ...

Wandering, Wandering as though you are lost, yet all around you, are those you called your friends. Okay, your talking in the second person, different but okay..... Fakes they were, ...

Wow, umm not really sure what you were going for there. The corwn of thorns made me think of christianity, along with the first few lines but im not really ...

Wow, I just had a reall long coment but it got deleted because my computer logged me off. Sorry Ill reread later when im not p***ed at my computer. No ...

I think this is great! good job. I dont agree with your last reviweres first comment though, It is in the correct form for poetry, if you combined the raw ...

OK here goes. I cringe afraid he will come back again. No matter what I say or do, this would most likely be on the same line as say The ...

Well i dont get the flower, thing, even with the wish, and im not sure how many other people would get it. I love it though, its great good job.