Rubz

You are beyond brilliant. I haven't been so drawn in to a piece of writing in so long! because stairs like a spine can only take so much mud from ...

This is a great poem that I can definitely relate to. I like that it was sad but still full of confidence that this friendship could make it through the ...

I don't even know what to say, this poem is absolutely beautiful! As I was reading I found myself longing to be one of those dancers. I imagined them to ...

I agree that you should make it longer! This felt so personal and honest, it was like a friend telling me about her experience with love. Beautiful! :)

Wow! As I was reading this I became more and more curious and couldn't stop! I really like the element of mystery that you used as well ;) I love ...

Time is becoming my enemy It's taking so much away It does not ask what I want It does not care what I say Time is in such a hurry ...

This poem was full of imagery I could see every scene you painted with your words! I personally don't like to read my work over because I keep changing it, ...

This is so pretty! I actually felt really sad reading it :( If you're speaking from personal experience I hope that you're feeling better now. Albert Camus once said, "Blessed ...

Thank you guys so much! I've never really known what to do with my writing its amazing to finally find a place to let it all live! You're right, I ...

Hahahaha okay must say that was awesome! I thought it was a love peom at first but coffee is very dear to my heart as well ;) Excellent play on ...

I really like this poem. I feel like it's along the lines of the statement "I don't love you, I love who you used to be." & I'm sure there ...

"I would not thaw your formwith wordless meaning, not with shapes unlike your own; I would lead you out into the sun,to melt each evening." Wow! I am realllyy impressed! ...

They say it takes years to figure out this life But I think it can all be linked to a knife A knife in your heart, a knife in your ...

This is actually very beautiful! I've had to say goodbye to my closest family and friends lately, and the look on her face just feels so familiar to me. I ...

This is a beautiful poem! I recently seperated from all my best friends and my family so I definitely know what you're going through, just don't ever forget that everything ...