RubyTuesday

Wow. I really loved this poem. It's such an intrigiung and powerful idea of a neglected daughter? coming back to her mother to show how mothering should really be done. ...

Also nothing like I expected, but I loved reading it. You can really imagine the man saying this and also the expression on the woman's face! Especially love the last ...

This a beautiful, powerful poem. It's a very interesting idea of the girl realising she is in fact dead, kind of exciting and horrifying at the same time. Can I ...

OK, so I loved your poem because it was so intriguing. I still don't know what it's supposed to mean but here's what I got from it: (probably a long ...

Hi! I'd firstly like to say that I loved your story and found it very touching. Like I think another reviewer said, at first I was skeptical and thoght it ...

hmmm... I think I'm related to the guy who wrote the French national anthem. I was a bit freaked out when I heard the translation though!

9/10 not sure what it is, but it's awesome!

Someone with a wistful smile whose expressions don't always match up to what they're feeling. Thoughtful? Probably way off, but whatever. Someone do me! :)

I love this poem! I think it really describes temptation well and I could relate to all the feeling you talked about. It seems like you've really explored temptation in ...

Ok, so I know this is very meldramtic but it's sort of supposed to be. We had to write a ballad in English based on Chaucer. This is my first ...

I think this is a truly incredible poem, very powerful and memorable. It was clever to use the character of the feared Boogie Man in this original way. The title ...

Thankyou so much for all your useful comments. I see what you mean with all of them. I think I will try re-writing it, and I would love if you ...

May's weathered hands raked through the dirt, giving her pumpkin plants space to breathee. Brilliant orange and glistening from last night's rain, they hung plump and round, almost ready to ...

This is an amazing, dramatic poem. I honestly couldn't see where it was going (maybe just my lack of imagination) and I really like that in a story/poem. It wasn't ...

Hi, I've got to admit I'm new at YWS and this is my first review! So I''m sorry if it's not too flash. Anyway, congratulations on a great piece of ...