RubyRed

Hello! You have an admirer. It'd be great if you could review these two chapters (hopefully they're short enough--I've been told I can be a bit of a wordcount slayer). ...

Hey, Keepwriting. I'd kind of like a second opinion on my thingy here if it's not too much trouble. Thanks :) I hope my review was helpful please feel free ...

Smith? xD Katya is incorrect @Amnesia. But the two a's are correct.

Nope you got three letters correct. Isabell, Bell, Annabell, or Bella?

You got three letters correct. Zolen?

Eggburt?

Made you look at this spoiler.

Poem number one: Just Like Heaven I breathe in the fresh air, And relax as I drift away. Running hands through my hair, Here I'll always stay. Safe from harm ...

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Bleh. 4/10

Games

Someone wrote him a nasty review.

10/10 I actually really like it. :)

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6/10 What's the "Jim" for? xD