Rubric

Something Elven deep inside the Raven made her crack open one eyelid and stare upwards perhaps "something Elven" is too precise? I mean, I don't know The Raven's backstory, but ...

Third person is working a charm. The info-dump on the Sense was subtle enough, and clear (though hopefully there'll be an elaboration at some point). You've done the initial description ...

Nice work for a first piece! I couldn't find any errors, but here's some advice for changes as a matter of style (take it or leave it, some would disagree ...

Hola, I'm Rubric and I've be reviewing you today! Down to business: porch light was the only light illuminating the murky alley you've a repetition of "light" here. Might be ...

Hmm, just two spelling mistakes in here. cast away wit fear *with* fear that seek rule. "that seek *to* rule" maybe? Fantasy authors always seem to love a good ol' ...

First of all, this belongs in fan-fiction. There has been a whole lot of criticims directed at this piece for its originality. I would advise setting it a fair bit ...

Alright , for a start you can't have gods, gods are unbalanced. Even the Greater Daemons of chaos aren't gods, they're just buffed up daemons. No other race has corporeal ...

Aloha. I'm Rubric and I'll be your reviewer today. i would first warn you that I am rather cold in my reviewing, but hope that you will take some useful ...

And suddenly Leo Is it sudden for Leo? I mean, he's hardly going to confuse being teleported to some place (or some other phenomena occurring) with waking up with a ...

Hah, you're the first to ask for a review, so I'm duty bound to respond, but this seems to have been gone over pretty thoroughly! Most of what I'm going ...

Hey, I'm Rubric and I'll be your literary surgeon this...well it's 12:24am where I am at the moment. The cloak flowed behind him, like a hovering, rippling body of black ...

Hello, I'm rubric and I'm honoured to be your reviewer today Morning in the city of Derc, and the dim light that had begun to climb over the looming mountains; ...

Hey, I'm Rubric and I'll be your reviewer. I won't waste time on idle comments, but this piece does seem rather extraordinary. Down to the critique; my great-grandmother told me ...

Madame Bovary. Although I'm sure there are guys out there who like it, and chicks who don't, the general decider on this one seems to be gender. It *does* seem ...

I read "the white man's burden" for english (honestly I would think it features in every post-colonial syllabus around these days), loving the original. I like your adaptation, though it's ...