Rubric

Generally: I really enjoyed the development in the Razinski-Erickson dynamic in this scene, particularly the first glimmers of serious and abiding dysfunction. As a reader I’m wondering how aware Ra

Howdy. Beginning with the general: Characterisation: Strong. The plot allows characters to introduce themselves, and you get a good indication of the different perspectives they each have for West Poi

Howdy, Generally, I'm a fan of the idea of the piece (and the previous part), but there appear to be, if not inconsistency issues, then certainly points of confusion. This ...

Big Picture: I enjoy this piece. It’s quite well written, you state your points, provide evidence, and relay information in an understandable way. Details: “are being given access to communicating

Howdy just a quick one from me. Big Picture: I enjoy the descriptions of magic, the rhyming, especially with the beggars, is appropriately arcane. The turning point in the plot, ...

Generally: Reslinn being incurious is an interesting trait, but it’s surprising that he doesn’t at least ask for clarification. The reply to the query about his identity was vague: it ...

General impressions: Simper is sometimes better: At times, you fall back on less conventional grammar and syntax, and this can trip you up. I do this myself. One thing I’ve ...

Howdy, as per request, here I am to do the thing with the words! To begin with the General; I enjoyed the dialogue, particularly the wife’s, as it has a ...

Howdy I’m Rubric. I enjoyed the basic framing of this piece and it has most of the skeleton required for a good tale, but I felt that the excecution was ...

Once again I'll focus on a bit-by-bit apporach. I've drawn particular attention to what I see as systemic or otherwise repeated concerns. I'm enjoying the fleshing out of characters and ...

Howdy I'm Rubric. Speaking generally I like the narrative-within-a-narrative style but it demands a much higher standard of desciption than you're giving it. We need to to get to grips ...

Howdy. Generally speaking, I enjoyed the characterisation of your narrator, but was uncertain about her father, as his word choice seemed to gyrate quite profoundly. The boy seemed fairly undeveloped,

Hello! I'm Rubric and I'll be taking a look at your piece. As a prologue, your piece does a good job of building suspense, introducing the concept of the supernatural, ...

Howdy, I'm Rubric, and I'll be reviewing your piece. I'll begin with a brief disclosure. I'm not really a fan of vampire fiction, it seems to me to be a ...

Hello! I enjoyed this piece. The setting is well established, and the main character is interesting, if somewhat confusing. It seems to be that he has a very detailed understanding ...