RubberKnife

Thanks BenFranks, I'm just a little concerned with your comment about each line needing punctuation. I don't find that each singular line of poetry requires some punctuation, because then you're ...

That series of verses was used to underscore the giantess towering above regular people. Isolation, power, and yet sorrow for being so magnificent that the underlings can't comprehend her.

When you're life seems so great, And nothing can bring you down, Why does someone come and break your heart? Ick. This tells me what you're feeling, what this poem ...

I walk the trembling earth abreast and beneath my feet lay the hard tracks of lost children. Their toes scraped black against a charred existence-- breaker boys smashing atoms like ...

This poem is quite personal, and I wrote it when my emotions were running high. Tell me what you think. Well, this may be your problem. Writing meant for publication ...