Young Writers Society

Here for another review. You're a great storyteller. Your descriptions are so detailed. Like before, I will repost a portion of your work that I edited. __________________________ "And they didn't ...

Hi, here for a quick review. Sort of... I love your storytelling. You're really good. Keep it up. Only criticism is not to be in a hurry because you miss ...

I'm blown away by how good this is. Your writing is beyond reproach. It's so good that it felt at times like I was reading an already published work. I ...

Hi, there. I like this. The story line is something I could roll with. However, there are a few things that you could work on. Let's start with the dialogue. ...

Hi, there. You've got a good idea going here, you only need to work a little bit on the execution. Right off the bat I noticed your preference for big ...

Sounds like a great idea. Firstly you need to identity your target audience. That will help you figure out what on earth you're going to put in your magazine. If ...

I actually thought you wrote this, and was about to shower you with praises. The English bible is very well written. Wish I could write like that. I think I ...

Wow! This is pretty sincere and direct. It is also easy to read. I like it when something i s easy to read, and it's something I've been trying to ...

Ok, deep breath! This is really good for your first venture into horror. There isn't enough praises that would accurately represent what a great job you've done here. Boy oh ...

This is a thought provoking piece. Questions about life, truth and what it all means are not easy to answer and like you've said everyone has his/her own version of ...

For your first attempt at poetry, I must say this wasn't bad. The format definitely threw me off and I actually thought it was deliberate, but you explain it wasn't ...

This is deeper than the Loch Ness. As the other reviewers have said below, you've managed to capture human nature with so few words. It's impressive. All this poem needed ...

Hahaha! This is brilliant, easy to miss but once you get it it's not just witty but brilliant. So many folk throw away their lives before a computer screen, and ...

Aww sweet! My immediate question though is, is this fiction or faction? And secondly if it is faction, how old is the author? If I may be so bold to ...

Profound. The way you've captured with the power of words the immense guilt of forbidden love is impressive. The blame is put squarely on the shoulders of lover and not ...