Young Writers Society

Hiya, could someone please take a look at a scary story I'm working on? Any kind of feedback would be greatly appreciated. By the way, Merry Christmas and a Happy ...

If anyone doesn't mind, I'd like some more feedback on my first chapter.

Would you please review my story, The Light Doesn't shine Here

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Hi there here's the first chapter of my story for your evaluation. Enjoy ad feel free to criticize!!

Hi we talked earlier and you said you were going to review my first novel on YWS. Well here it is :)