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Rosewood

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Wildfires (Part 1)

    No, but thank you for asking. Ny middle name is Rose, and I'm probably going to go by my first and middle name when I publish. What are the Rosewood ...

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Wildfires (Part 2)

    Thank you for your feedback! Yes, even I think she came to terms with it rather quickly, I never changed it because I thought perhaps that could be because she ...

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Wildfires (Part 1)

    Thank you for the feedback! I've seen that people agree that he jumps to conclusions too quickly, and I will consider editing it. If you wan to hear my thought ...

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Wildfires (Part 1)

    I've noticed that many people thought that. I wanted to seem that he was in shock- who wouldn't be- and that led him to make a choice without considering the ...

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Wildfires (Part 2)

    Thank you for your feedback!

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Writer

    Oh, okay! Thank you for taking the time to explain it to me, It makes much more sense and the poem feels a lot deeper in meaning!

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Wildfires (Part 1)

    Thank you for pointing out the grammatical errors! I usually have them fixed, but I posted this in a rush. As for part two, what was confusing?

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Wildfires (Part 1)

    *%uD835%uDE10 Messed that up, but you get the idea.

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Wildfires (Part 1)

    Thank you for your feedback! To clarify, yes, it was a fireman. I meant to include something about that, but oops, guess I forgot. As for the ending, I couldn't ...

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Wildfires (Part 2)

    Thank you for the feedback! I don't want to disappoint you, but I'm going to leave it at parts one and two. I wanted a dramatic story and then something ...

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Wildfires (Part 1)

    Thank you for your feedback! When Felix changes his mind, I meant it to be based upon his sister's cry. He'd been so focussed on his friend, he hadn't even ...

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Empty

    Oops, that wasn't worded correctly! *I agree with most of your helpful critiques, but where you mentioned the contrast in the emotional tone with the emptiness, I meant that, throughout ...

    Sep 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Empty

    Thank you for the review! I agree with most of your helpful critiques, but where you mentioned the contrast in the emotional tone. I meant throughout most of the poem ...

    Sep 12, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Other Re: A Future Mistake - Chapter Two

    Oh, my favorite line was the second one I highlighted. It was short, but just perfectly written! As for my reviewing, I know I don't know the full story just ...

    Sep 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Other Re: A Future Mistake - Chapter Two

    Oh, my favorite line was the second one I highlighted. It was short, but just perfectly written! As for my reviewing, I know I don't know the full story just ...

    Sep 11, 2020


Well, if I can't get this chapter to work....at least I will have exercised my fingers.
— Kaia