Rosewood

Oh, my favorite line was the second one I highlighted. It was short, but just perfectly written! As for my reviewing, I know I don't know the full story just ...

Oh, my favorite line was the second one I highlighted. It was short, but just perfectly written! As for my reviewing, I know I don't know the full story just ...

Oh, my favorite line was the second one I highlighted. It was short, but just perfectly written! As for my reviewing, I know I don't know the full story just ...

Oh, my favorite line was the second one I highlighted. It was short, but just perfectly written! As for my reviewing, I know I don't know the full story just ...

Oh, my favorite line was the second one I highlighted. It was short, but just perfectly written! As for my reviewing, I know I don't know the full story just ...

Oh, my favorite line was the second one I highlighted. It was short, but just perfectly written! As for my reviewing, I know I don't know the full story just ...

Oh, my favorite line was the second one I highlighted. It was short, but just perfectly written! As for my reviewing, I know I don't know the full story just ...

Why thank you for that review! I definitely see your points, and a few my teacher mentioned, and if I don't fix them here, I'll definitely fix them on my ...

Oh, yikes! I didn't even realize that! My teacher came and pointed that out to me too... but thank you for the review!

Thank you so much!

Thanks!

Agh! I cannot seem to get breaks between the stanzas, so just know that they're there every five lines.

Thank you and welcome to YWS!

Thank you! I really like the adjectives 'creeped' and 'slithered' a lot better, so I may take you up on that offer. As for the character itself, I almost always ...

Thank you! I agree the character needs serious development to avoid your nicely phrased 'a touch cliche'... which I would've done beforehand if I hadn't posted this blindly.