RoseMonarch

First of all, thanks again. Secondly, there will be a big celebration of sorts. Finally, I think I'm going to take some time to rework this with all the advice ...

Thank you for reviewing me. Descriptions are a weak point of mine that I'm working hard to fix and improve on. The problem that I come across is that I ...

Sorry for the late reply, but thank you again for taking the time to review me. A few things I want to point out, I'm writing (or at least trying ...

Thank your for taking the time to write this review. I appreciate it and will take into account everything you%u2019ve said.

Thank you for your input! I didn't notice that my descriptions got shorter as I went on so I'm going to go back and fix that, along with other stuff ...

Okay, that sounds super cool. I'll be sure to tune in for that. Good luck!

Someplace like Pennsylvania, Vermont, etc. Cold North Eastern but with a lot of trees.

Thanks, I had a blast rewriting the chorus. To answer your question, it's a fictional Verona since all the towns named Verona we're on states I didn't particularly want to ...

Overall, I really enjoyed this. It read like the beginning of a Sherlock Holmes case on a farm cooperative. You have great descriptions of the bodies, the setting, and characters. ...

Hi, thepages. Thank you! I hope you like the next ones too.