RoseMonarch

Well, for this being the first chapter of your novel that I've read it's pretty great. I'm not too lost and I feel like I've gotten a rundown of everything ...

This poem does a great job of telling me who Ismelda the Sixth is, even without reading the commentary. The fact that even the Devil questions why she's going to ...

First off, I agree with everything that StormBlessed said. Secondly, I think you added nice details when describing the characters and setting. Ex: deserted city streets, dark unforgiving forest, comm