Rose94

Wow I like you you kept it very simple, it had a powerful affect. Your poem is amazing, I look forward to reading more of your work.

I never saw through your disguise, I never thought your words were lies, My feelings meant nothing at all, You never wanted me, you never even cared. It was all ...

The poem was really really good, I liked it a lot. You kept the line lenght through the entire poem which is really good, but to me it seemed kind ...

You're writing is pretty good overall though you may not want to be so repeative with certain word. Other than That it was very good.

You came to me today looking so innocent as you say you're sorry. You tell me you still want to be friends but how stupid do you think I am, ...