RosalieNoble

Where were the spots? (So I can try to fix them)

Thanks! I'm not actually that good though. I posted this after my professor went back through it with me and gave me revisions to work on. Haha

Sweet, thanks. What exactly do you mean by relevant and how would you improve on it? I'm trying to see what you mean.

Thank you so much! I was going through your review and could see how much work you put into it, so I thank you. 1. I wasn't so sure of ...

I think most people, when they aren't sure where a noise is coming from, will look up and around to try and find it. In your character's case, it doesn't ...

If it was part of the prompt, props! You did quite well! Would it be weird if I said I already had seen your background? haha, I looked after I ...

Hello NicolMemo, Thanks for reviewing, I thought about reporting them but I couldn't figure out how. I will respond in order: First, my first sentence was there on purpose. I ...

Thank you for this wonderful review! I was actually expecting a lot of what you said, I had also sent this piece to a few of my writing friends to ...

I thought it was really interesting how you kind of eased Gilbert and Krishna's relationship out into the story instead of saying "I'm gay, he's gay, we are gay together" ...