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Thanks so much Shady

"Ooh! I'm excited to get to meet Shandi (presumably) soon!" oh my gosh it's such a weird place that you came in that you knew Shandi after she died before ...

Hey, you can be proud of old work, especially when it means you can look back on it and see how much you've improved! I've got some real old poems ...

oh I knew that's what it was about. I thought it was pretty clear haha sorry if I didn't make /myself/ clear that I understood it. I like the title ...

Ooh, also, I want to say that I like your title, and also that I don't really like the word "bemuse" in this poem, but also I think I have ...

Oops my review accidentally posted twice. Thanks for posting this, by the way! I enjoyed reading it :)

Ooh good catch with that second thing. I changed it. Thank you!

Very good points and ideas here, thank you :]

I don't think I was as clear as I could have been about certain historical world building of this. Basically, apocalyptic scenario, some bits of humanity (~100 million I think ...

Oh my goodness I didn't mean for that but it would be hilarious haha I don't think so, though. I should change those 3 letters to something else haha

Yeah large amounts of fertilizer are very explosive and have been used in the past to create bombs as acts of terror :( Strange you didn't know that, but I ...

I was also worried about being too passive when I reflected on this chapter. I think in time though it will be balanced out by future events where Kerra is ...

The chapters are mostly "oh look I wrote a thousand words" so I wouldn't give too much weight to chapter breaks haha

it's from 2014 o.o;

I'd love to chat with you about form and craft sometime! This poem is just the first draft, literally just jotted down straight from my experience on a train. Since ...