Ronnok

Thanks, both of you. I know i have a long long way to go. This was just a part, i didn't write this twice by the way. It was just ...

Hey all. This is a segment of Twilight Skies which i am deciding whether or not to keep based on your much valued critiques! The other Twilight Skies i posted ...

A well structured beginning that has left me wanting more! I strongly suggest that anyone reading this piece read the second and third chapters as the plot is hinted at ...

Hey. I like your story alot. The splitting headache and blood boiling beneath her skin...and her being unable to keep up with sword skills. I think i know where this ...

Thanks. I will be keeping the core concept of this piece but likely (I'm not entirely sure yet) do a restart in a different setting. Also I've found myself exceptionally ...

Once again brilliant. I am beginning to envy your slower but more intense writing style. I agree with much of what Bickazor has said in his very long and thorough ...

Hey. What little there was to critique has been critiqued already. I just have to say that YES you should continue this. You give a crystal clear view of the ...

Thanks everyone for your reviews. I will be putting everyone's feedback to use ASAP! Karsten i see what your saying. I was especially worried about the cliche elements to this ...

Twilight Skies (R13 -Contains coarse language) Chapter 1 “Ali, what is WRONG with you? Care to explain it for the benefit of us normal girls?” Chelsea smirked as her minions ...

Hi. Its very intriguing. My need to know what happens next continued to build through the whole chapter. I don't know what it's about but i love the way you ...