Ronaele

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Hi everyone, I'm Eleanor. I've just joined today and so far have just been reading and commenting on pieces (and intend do post a few more comments before I post ...

I thought you had a good storyline here, with plenty of scope for more about the girl and her life. There were quite a few errors though - mostly punctuation ...

An excellent poem. So clinical straightaway because of the numbers. " This, forever, is the smell of medical school: death and chemicals and tropical fruit. " What a great sentence ...